Sunday, March 8, 2009

Dotting Away


Let us start
From the end
Let us engage in recreating
The moments we had when we began
Let us laugh
Like no one’s watching
Let us start
By dotting away

While so many around
Pray for their gain
Let us pray for humanity
In our child’s play
While they are fighting
For a line
Let us fly
And make the sun shine
Over our heads
And into our souls
Let us start
By dotting away

We are all alive
At this immense and lovely place
Let us join our hands
Despite any creed or race
Let us pull ourselves out
From this blinding haze
Let us be blissful
And escape this hatred without a trace

Let us start all over again
By dotting away

© rahul

Co-Editor(s) - praveer & rahul
09.03.2009

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image courtesy - Unity India

3 comments:

Opaque said...

Yes, let us have this thoughtful message dotting away.

Bravo!!! You have written this very well!!!

PS: Ahem, I notice a similarity in the image.

Make Me Disappear said...

Thank you a lot. You made my day..

Similarity in image? hehe..I know there is..Srry bout tht :)

Opaque said...

Glad to know that I made your day. I wrote to you quite a few weeks back that you were good. Your main enemy was speed.

I hope you have learnt your lesson. I hope the response in the community is good as well. All the best there!!!

And,yes about the image... don't bother about it.