Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Blood Weapons..


Blood weapons, resembling death
Salvation dies, acidic breath,
Increasing pain, hurting sanes
Crawling insects, living in drains

This is what we are
This is what we were,
Nothing but pooped corpse


Mortality breeds, ignorance prevails
Politics deadly disease, corruption hails,
i kill you, you kill me, such is life
Dead bodies lying on ground, her son his wife

This is what we are
This is what we were
Nothing but pooped corpse

© rahul

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E-mail(s) - sharma.rahul@rahul.co.in


5 comments:

Unknown said...

nice one..i lik this composition of urs d most

Opaque said...

A good thought. I am not happy with the word usage in line 7. And, you know which word I am referring to. And, some punctuation errors. Keep it up!!!

Make Me Disappear said...

Well, yes I do know.
Thankx for giving it a read. Though you have read it before too :)

Saadi said...

Pooped corpse?!

Didn't get this one! I've read better ones from you, buddy!

Make Me Disappear said...

One of the worst work i did. Don't know why I put that word.