A walk alone
Into the weeds
A foul smell
A taste in mouth
Is it something worth dying for?
And crying for?
I have an answer
Do you have none?
Ah! It makes me wonder
Silently crawls in my skin
Black melancholy
I am in, yeah
Breeding Mary Jane
Love of my life
Trance, a sweet little pain
Green is the color
On the death bed
I have no regrets
Opened up the window pane
For new pain, a new life
A life just began to fall
To stand up again, broken into pieces
On a t-U-rning road
Right now, right here
Green is her color
And pale is mine
Am I dead yet
Am I no more alive?
I am a puppet in her hands
She binds me to herself
Never lets me go
Set me free, set me free
There is nothing left for me
© rahul
25.03.2009
Chaat Vaat Khaalo..!! Creative House
Image - www.erlendmork.com (Might be subject to Copyright)
Into the weeds
A foul smell
A taste in mouth
Is it something worth dying for?
And crying for?
I have an answer
Do you have none?
Ah! It makes me wonder
Silently crawls in my skin
Black melancholy
I am in, yeah
Breeding Mary Jane
Love of my life
Trance, a sweet little pain
Green is the color
On the death bed
I have no regrets
Opened up the window pane
For new pain, a new life
A life just began to fall
To stand up again, broken into pieces
On a t-U-rning road
Right now, right here
Green is her color
And pale is mine
Am I dead yet
Am I no more alive?
I am a puppet in her hands
She binds me to herself
Never lets me go
Set me free, set me free
There is nothing left for me
© rahul
25.03.2009
Chaat Vaat Khaalo..!! Creative House
Image - www.erlendmork.com (Might be subject to Copyright)
4 comments:
I like this one. I have been reading this more than once now. I like the way you have broken down a possibly single question to a double one. And, this line -
"I have an answer
Do you have none?"
Those lines, Rahul, to me are a show-stopper. I mean it. It might take a while for a few to notice and get it. But, once one does, it kicks in hard.
Overall, very well-written!!!
@Brosreview
Thank You brother..!!
beutifully written...
one of ur best composition!!
liked it!!
now the world needs to knw about ur supreme personality!!
keep it up!!
@nandita
Thank You baby...Thank you so much :)
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