She took a while
To stand again
To gather herself
Again
Beaten by fate
She loved the hate that came her way
From everyone, from everywhere
She laughed, and then she cried
She was a mother
Of beaten fate
Her memories fade
While she slept late
And when she woke up
She couldn’t feel the sun
She could hear the mourns
She laughed, and then she cried
Everyday was the same old day
She couldn’t feel the rain
The plants were dead from long ago
She couldn’t even see them die
And then she took a while
To realize
That everyone was gone
Far away
She was the only one
Left alone
The love was gone
And hate was grown, and then she cried
Chaat Vaat Khaalo..!! Creative House
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6 comments:
Staggering comeback! I mean this, and you know I do, this is you being at your best.
I loved the structure, the heartfelt lines. That's it, I loved the package.
Simple and strong lines expressing loads of emotions. And, a fantastic message too.
Now, keep at it, Rahul!!! Keep writing!!! The graph has gone past the roof this time mate!!!
Ajey,
This review means a lot to me. I worked on this song with all my heart and soul, heh. Didn't wanted to disappoint anyone this time.
And I am glad that my work paid this time.
Thank You so much..!!
WOW rahul... AJ said it all...
lines that stole my heart:
"Left alone
The love was gone
And hate was grown, and then she cried"
@Vivji
Thank you Di :)
You made my day :)
This Is Something else!!! the imagery is exquisite! The allusions to nature to explain human emotions OMG! Sexy!
@Wandering Philosopher
Thank you buddy! :)
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