Divide, Divide
Clone walking side by side
Hey,
Cut open yourself wide
An evil smile
Proudly proud pile
The clone’s wile
Rising tides of Nile
He might kill you inside
And, abandon your pride
While you crawl
Your Alter-ego glide
See-hide, see-hide
From behind the wall
Swallow your pride
And, dig it inside
Divide, Divide
Clone walking side by side
Hey,
Cut open yourself wide
© rahul
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2 comments:
Hmm, interesting theme here!!! And, I, for one, get the message here. But, expression matters a lot.
Overdose of rhymes here. I don't think it is necessary. And, some seem obviously forced here which kinda disrupts the experience. No offence.
You could polish this one.
@Ajey
Thank You for the read..!!
Actually, I wanted to make it sound like this..Overdose..heh
No offense taken.. :)
I shall polish it further...
Thank You..!!
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