alas!
Oh, what a day it was
I was flowing with the wind
Standing by the creek
Saw an angel with a broken wing
I stuttered to a halt
And hid behind a rock
As if compelled by
Some mystical force
It was a vision extraordinaire
Though there was gloom on her face
As if her crying eyes were asking
“Will I ever be healed, is someone here?”
Something inside me wanted to help
Though I was not sure
“From the whirlpool of pains
Would I be able to bring her ashore?”
I walked up to the creek
And asked who she was
With frightened eyes she looked at me
Into the tree she vanished, alas!
© praveer & rahul
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4 comments:
This is one of your good ones Rahul. I would play with the punctuations a bit. But, that is just me. Good one!!!
Thanx man..!!! Am Glad you liked it
One word; Awesome!!
Thanx brother :)
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